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    Open Rayfe Avery: Mercenary Commander




    Rayfe Avery
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    38 as of 10 ABY :: Corellian/Independent :: Mercenary

    Currently on: Lorta

    Character Background

    • Grew up during the Clone Wars, inspired by footage and reports from the holonet to join the Military .
    • Focused solely on a career with the Imperial Army through his younger years.
    • After seeing how the Empire treated other species he chose not to join. With no other skills he became a hired gun.
    • A skilled fighter and capable leader of men, he takes jobs where he can find them.
    • Doesn't care for the Empire but will work for them because they pay.
    • Not convinced the Alliance can unite the galaxy with their failure to take the core. Sees them as Separatists 2.0 but will work for them if they offer enough credits.
    • Refuses to work with the Hutts. Has been screwed over by them or their lackeys too many times.


    Raw Material

    • Has many friends still on Corellia. Visits when he can.
    • Experience and leadership abilities have him recognized as at least a Sargeant, but more often the NON-COM position of Staff Sargeant.
    • Believes in victory through tactics, strategy, and not having to completely annihilate the enemy.
    • Collects Clone Wars era memorabilia and reads romance novels. His favorite is "The Twi'lek Connection".
    • Isn't an officer because he, "works for a living".
    • Owes favors to several Spacers due to needing rides to get to jobs on different sides of the galaxy.
    • Sometimes is remembered for collateral damage caused by men under his command and is looked down on or paid less because of it.
    • The Cold War has been good for mercenary work. Proxy wars and battles are keeping hired guns busy.


    Plot Ideas

    • Training a group of Stormtroopers on being better soldiers and better thinkers. The Troopers later defect.
    • Has a adversarial relationship with a few members of the ISB who think he'll lead them to a big target. Really they're mistaken.
    • Mission to rescue/capture a VIP with opposing sides pressuring him for the VIP.




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    Current Plots


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    ((OOC if anyone has any thoughts about the last two sections, let me know. I'll be trying to talk to people in chat.))
    Last edited by Rayfe_Avery; Aug 18th, 2018 at 01:00:16 AM. Reason: Finishing.

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    One thing to be mindful of is the timeframe of the setting. It’s over a decade since the battle of Endor, and the Rebel Alliance has become a nation - The Alliance of Free Planets. So it’s worth noting that the good guys can certainly pay for the help now, though whether it’s competitive pay is another story

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    Hey Rai'faani,
    I managed to make the correction and add a little bit more. I'm still not sure what to put for current plots because I'm not sure whose, if anyone's, in progress thread to join and existing relationships is a similar problem. Plot ideas are easier to fill in once I get my feet wet.
    What are your thoughts?

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    Don't worry about current plots too much, a lot of folks haven't filled all of theirs out either, since that portion is very fluid and you can come back and add in things as you go along.

    I gotta say, I'm loving your raw material section. The little quirks and interests - to me - are what give a character depth, and this little factoid of him liking romance novels is fantastic

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    Thank you Loklorien. I believe you have to add a few simple character traits so they feel like fully fleshed out characters before they get a lot of screen time.
    Hopefully I'll start Role Playing soon because I'm afraid if I don't that I'll just keep making additions.

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    You've got some great details that make for some solid character depth.

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