The Stormtrooper Effect Episode I

[StormtrooperFX]

Hi guys,

I just created a short Star Wars fan movie using some Stormtrooper figures, some cardboard, and the mobile app Takes. Best way to describe it is half-movie/half comic. I'm still getting used to the process. but I think it turned out pretty well. Any tips to improve? I'm thinking of turning it into a ~weekly series.

You can watch the 1 min movie here:

http://www.takes.com/Take/82269d51b1/

Screencap:
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Remember to let me know what you think! Thanks!
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[Dasquian Belargic]

Got to admit, I chuckled at that ending

[Morgan Evanar]

Chuckle-worthy.

[StormtrooperFX]

Thanks guys . Basically, with each episode my objective is to get the viewer to sympathize a bit with a Stormtrooper, just to have him die at the end. In the first ep, it's supposed to be the final moments of the first Death Star. Unfortunately, I don't know if that final shot made it clear that they were on the Death Star.

[Lilaena De'Ville]

That was great. I got that they were on the Death Star, but I'd recognize that ridiculous explosion ring anywhere.

[Dasquian Belargic]

^ Likewise, that explosion is unmistakable to a SW fan, I think!